Friday, February 15, 2008
History hw
Hi.I am Annie.I born in Rome and live in Rome until I died.I was born at 12th,April,1459 and died at 14th,July,1539.My father died when I was five.He was a nameless port and painter.My mother cared us hardly after father died.She was a housewife but she was bent on music.She spent her spare time composing music.I have a brother.He was 2 years older than me.My brother was a painter and sculptor.He wanted to be painter and sculptor because father's influence.We lived in a small town happily. I was a writer but I also interested in drawing and music.I think this was my family's influence too.I taught children drawing and writing from monday to wednesday in a small school.The children were cute and lovely.I am very happy for teaching them.In spare time,I would writing and drawing and compose music.These were all my life!My creations all about my life or my discover.Luckily,I have met many good friends and teachers.They were always taught me something news and share their feelings for my works. I was died when I was 80.I felt satisfied for my life.And I hope my children can have famous works in history.
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Annie, like Jessica, you have excelled where your classmates have failed. For being the first student to successfully write about yourself (and not as someone notable) in the Remaissance, you get an extra-mark boost.
Though you write simple sentences that deliver few details into the times, there is still enough pertinent information to paint a fascinating picture of your life!
I would suggest using the past tense to describe the past, since, it appears, you have already died!
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